I missed it!

Sunday Night Football! Last night I was watching the Eagles ver. Dollass game. It was the fourth quarter, and I was having trouble keeping my eyes opened, sorry to say. The game was exciting, but my dosage was wearing off.

There were less than three minutes left and the referees were reviewing a fumble that I missed, my eyes were closed for a second. I looked at the clock and thought the game was going into overtime. I needed something to keep my eyes opened for a fifth quarter.

It was past time to take the dog out, so I figured a brisk walk would help me stay awake. I usually take him for a quarter mile walk before turning in. We went out thinking just a short walk, but before I knew it the dog was pulling me around the block. We got home and the game was over.

“What, What Happened!”

I missed it???

After the review the Eagles kept the ball and, “the next play they scored and held on to win the game.”???

If you don’t know why the Eagles Fans hate Dallas so much, you must have missed the 80s. The Cowboys kept bucking the Eagles out of the post season in the 80s. The Eagles Fans are an extraordinary group of characters, a few weeks ago I saw a spoof film on the Fox pregame show. They included a seen from a half time show when the Eagles Fans booed and threw snow balls at Santa.

“What gives him the right to be so jolly, when the Eagles are losing.”

That’s my defense.

“Why I shot my dog”

I feel I should let you know that Chancy Boy is alive and well? I write mostly fiction?


Chance on Kitchen floor

Space Travel?

Traveling to other solar systems via. Fictional stories. The Star Trek way, by warping space around the shuttle, is too un-real when you think about it too much. Light speed travel is too slow to travel to another solar system. The human body wouldn’t be able to handle the time dilations on a shuttle moving at light speed. If we were in frozen stasis pods, we’d have freezer burn and wouldn’t survive.

Travel within our solar system is too slow today, but via. Fictional stories it is believable. In my first New Mars book I introduced light speed travel. We can get to Mars in four seconds, right? No we first need to reach light speed, it takes an hour to gain such speeds, but it takes just a minute to cercal the sun at the speed of light, and then an hour to slow down to Mars. The passengers would be drugged, so they could handle such speeds.

You’re asking why go around the sun…well if you want to move at the speed of light you need to go further. Once in motion, with zero gravity and zero atmosphere, let’s just say it’s hard to stop. The slow boat to Mars takes two weeks, in The New Mars that takes place after the mid-21st century. Today it takes seven months, but when we have space crafts that can get us to Mars in two week we will have month long Space Cruses to Mars and back.

In real life it looks like we won’t have to wait too long for two day Space Cruses around Earth. Vacation at Zero Gravity will make you feel up lifted literally, and take some weight off your, feet, back, and shoulders. On Mars there is a retirement community in my books, because there’s a third Earth gravity on Mars and it’s a great place to retire too.

Traveling to another solar system we would use a light speed craft that would reach five times the speed of light, but it would still take us over twenty years to travel to a solar system with a planet like Earth. We would have one hundred toddlers who would be in pods full of enriched puss to nourish their growing bodies. Audio education files would be playing the entire trip to ensure the children of New Earth are well educated.

The Light Speed Space Ship would cercal the planet as it slows down and the now fully grown children will be waking up and getting to know each other. The story starts before the takeoff with the profiteers funding the project, the scientist amazed by the exploration, and the pessimists talking about it being the way to save humanity, after we’ve ruined Home Earth.

I’m thinking of the Christmas Carol theme, not religious but, with the four points of Humanity. http://www.novelguide.com/a-christmas-carol/theme-analysis

I didn’t mean to do it???

Oh I hate him, I wish I could talk to him, I’m hopeless. What could I do to make him see me for who I am, do I want him to see a week little girl with a crush? He always passes me in class, to his seat at the back of the room. He’s not one of the bad kids, but he stays hidden, and tries not to be noticed in class.

He’s quiet, but not shy with his friends. I wish I was one of his friends. My mom used to say that I needed to be more out going to make friends. I don’t know how outgoing she was, other than with her Covent. I would ask her if I could go with her and her friends, but she always said, “Focus on your study’s dear, and after you find your focus you may join us.”

Every full moon she would party with the Covent, but I never could join them, because my mother never thought I had enough focus. I guessed that she meant I had to graduate school first, but now she’s gone, and she was my only friend. I go to the attic to look threw her boxes of books and Halloween stuff.

When she was alive it was like Halloween all year, but we didn’t have candy, she would make funny looking meals from time to time. Maybe one of the books is a cook book, and I could make something the boy would like.

Oh I haven’t been up here for a while. There’s dust everywhere, oh there are her boxes, let’s see.  Spells, spells, spells, oh what’s this? Love Spells, well maybe there’s something like directions on making a pie for someone you love.

What’s this, directions to make a doll, no that can’t be right? Love Doll, use to control your love. Maybe I can learn to control my love, so I stop loving what I can’t have…no this says it’s used to control the person who you love. Will this work? Well, what do I need?

The next day the girl had a small doll in her bag that she made from what she found in the attic and a few things she has collected over the years of the boy she loves to hate. She walked nervously for her locker, and had a thought that she might leave the doll in the locker.

She saw the boy was down the hall, with doll in hand she walked up behind him and said under her breath the incantation to spell the doll for the boy.

She took a step back, and said, “Hi John.”

John made a quick 180 to face her, and said, “Oh, Amy I was wondering who was sneaking up behind me.”

Amy stood with a grin.

He snarled at her and said, “Keep your distance.” And terns back to his friends.

Amy’s eyes widened, she looked at the doll, turned away, squeezed its head and heard a thud behind her.

The boy was on the ground with his hands grasping at his head. The girl dropped the doll and the boy cried out.

Good Old Cartoons?

I was thinking about old cartoons I used to watch and what interested me to keep watching. One of them was “Tailspin” http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/TaleSpin

The lead character was Baloo from “Disney’s, The Jungle Book” with the young side kick Kit, he piloted a propeller driven carrier plain, delivering packages for “Higher for Hire”. A delivery service owned by a single mother “Rebeca” who was trying to keep her small business running.

While making deliveries Baloo would have to avoid “Air Pirates” and would have odd encounters with other pilots. Shere Khan from “The Jungle Book” who ran Khan Industries that Higher for Hire competed with.

The hero of the story was Baloo, the villains were the Air Pirates, with the corporate leader Shere Khan as a rival. The show had a number of characters to carry the stories, including the relationship between Baloo and Rebeca.

I was thinking, every good book of short story needs those 5 characters with a steady plot to keep the stories in focus.

My first thought was to write a story about a space ship delivering goods from solar system to solar system. Firefly, Serenity, was my next thought, and I thought about why that show didn’t last. In my opinion Firefly was a great show, but the plot wasn’t focused enough.

Now I’m thing of a delivery service in the mid-1800s. A delivery man with two horses and one trailer finds an investor in Huston, Texas to start a delivery service from Huston to Chicago. The delivery man now has two trailers and four horses and a man riding shotgun. The man who is riding shotgun has an actual shotgun to word off black hat cowboys who may pilfer their cargo.

The relationship between the two men has its troubles that start some arguments, but they find a common ground. The investor came from big corporate New York to start business in the central U.S. Nether of the two men like corporations, they believe the corporations are taking over.

I won’t write that story, never mind the fact that Corporate America has saved the economy…I don’t like stories about the past, because people start believing those stories are how it was…

Short Stories?

I was thinking about how to write short stories. I’m not a teacher, so I hope you don’t learn anything from this post. You need to tell/show the reader the location and plot in the first paragraph. In the next two you introduce the hero and the antagonist, and then you show the reader how the hero is antagonized.

That’s the hard art about writing short stories…I thought, how do you make it easier? I had an idea that has been used…I thought, use known characters, but that’s not original…. You know characters from movies that get redone over and over…like Batman!


Ryan Wayne was out late last night, he woke after eleven to find just one girl in bed with him. He slowly looked around the shady room, and said, “Bell, where’s Ivy?”

Bell pulled the sheet to her neck, and said, “Owe, Ry-Ry stay in bed with me.”


Ryan shrugged and started to lay back when he heard a thump from down stairs, and said, “Burney, you know I like sleeping late on Saturdays, so keep it down!”

He waits for the common response, Sorry Master, won’t happen again, but he heard nothing. Ryan shoots up thinking, Wait, Burney’s on vacation today…so what was that?


Ryan is on his feet now and looks to Bell, and said, “Stay here.”

As he is leaving the room Bell cries out, “Wayne’s awake, let’s go.” A fully dressed Bell buzzes past him for the stairs.


Ryan is a huffed as he runs for the stairs, looks down to see two men carrying a painting sized box. The big guy dropped it, and said, “Get John to help you.”

“Bear, don’t use our real names.”

“Ok Weasel, get Coyote!”


Ryan shouts at them and runs to his closet for a rifle, and loads it with bird pellets. He hears thump after thump up the stairs, and he runs out of the bedroom, rifle in hand to find Bear coming for him.

Ryan didn’t have a chance to say, Stop, so he pulled the trigger, and Bear was thrown into the wall. As Ryan walked by him he saw he hit him squarely in the chest, but he was gasping for air.


Down stairs Weasel was getting the last bags, and from a distant Ryan shot again, but Weasel just jumped and kept running to the car.




I’m not one to write detective stories but you can see where this is headed. A Detective Gordon, will do his/her investigation and find a ring of thefts and an organized group of criminals that they take down. If I would continue the story it would get too long, and the story has been told time and time again….


What would make it new would be different characters with different views of how to save the city of Gotham.  Yes, there is a new TV series this fall that takes place in the Gotham before there was a Batman. I hope they aren’t the same old stories.

Two sentence stories?

I found these stories and had a laugh…. Thought I’d share them to encourage you all to try and write your own.

Think of an event and write a one-liner about it with a response.

Have a laugh….

I was having a pleasant dream when what sounded like hammering woke me. After that, i could barely hear the muffled sound of dirt covering the coffin over my own screams!

“I cant sleep”, she whispered, crawling into bed with me. I woke up cold, clutching the dress she was buried in.

I begin tucking him into bed and he tells me, “daddy, check for monsters under my bed”. I look underneath for his amusement and see him, another him, under the bed, staring back at me quivering and he whispered “daddy, theres somebody on my bed!”

You get home, tired after a long days work and ready for a relaxing night alone. You reach for the light switch, but another hand is what you feel instead on top of it!

I cant move, breathe, speak, or hear and its so dark all the time. Had i known it would be this lonely, I would have been cremated instead…

She went upstairs to check on her sleeping toddler. The window was open and the bed was empty… what happened?

I never go to sleep… So why do I keep waking up?

My daughter wont stop crying and screaming in the middle of the night. Visiting her grave and asking her to stop doesnt help either.

After working a hard day, I came home to see my girlfriend cradling our child. I didnt know which was more frightening, seeing my dead girlfriend and stillborn child, or knowing that someone broke into my apartment and place them there.

There was a picture of me sleeping in my phone. I live alone.

I hope up to hear knocking on glass. At first I thought it was the window, until I
heard it coming from the mirror again.

The last thing I saw was my alarm clock flashing 12:07 before she pushed her long rotting nails through my chest. her other hand muffling my screams. I sat bolt upright, relieved it was only a dream, but as I saw my alarm clock 12:07, I heard my closet door creak open.

Growing up with cats and dogs, I got used to the sounds of scratching at my door while I slept. Now that i live alone, its much more unsettling.

In all of this time that I have lived alone in this house, I could swear that I have closed more doors than I have opened.

I heard my mother calling me from downstairs. As I started making my way down the stairs and towards the dark living room downstairs, I heard my mothers voice from upstairs yelling “DONT GO DOWN THERE, I HEARD THAT TOO”, as I found myself frozen in the middle of the dark stairs… (my personal favourite!)

She asked me why was I breathing so heavily. I wasnt.

My wife woke me up last night to tell me there was an intruder in our house. She was murdered by an intruder 2 years ago.

I awoke to the sound of the baby monitor crackling with a female voice comforting my firstborn child. As I adjusted to a new position, my arm brushed against my wife, sleeping next to me.

I always thought my cat had a staring problem – she always seemed fixated on my face, until one day, after looking at a picture of mine recently taken, she was always looking just right behind me…

There is nothing like the laughter of a baby. Unless its 1 A.M. and you’re home alone.

Full moon?


A young innocent-looking girl says with a devilish grin. “The full moon is tonight!”

A boy in his early teens looks down at the girl with a questionable look. “No kidding? I could feel it coming all-day.  I am thinking of going out tonight.”

The little girl puts her hands to her hips, and said. “John, you aren’t going to run with the gang of mutts in the park, are you?”

John puts his hand to his chest, and said. “Barb, how could you think that I would hang with those mutts? But, I am tired of spending the best night of the month hiding.”

Barb thought she should show concern, and questioned. “But, it’s not safe…?”

John didn’t want to hear it, and interrupted her. “Oh, I can take care of myself…I’m thirteen, and I’m strong enough to keep myself, out of trouble!

Barb played the concerned good little sister, and told her parents what John was up to. Later that evening Barb met her mother with in the gated yard of her father’s estate.

With an innocent look on her face she looked up at her mother, and said. “Mom, where’s Daddy and John?”

“Your father’s dealing with John.”

Barb was watching the gates with anticipation, expecting to see her father dragging John through them. It was getting late and Barb started to become disappointed, and asked. “Where are they?”

Barb’s mother was watching the horizon for the rising moon, and said “Don’t worry your father already locked the gate.”

Barb was becoming upset, “What? Isn’t Dad bringing John home?”

“Your father knows the safe places deep in the woods.”

Barb was more disappointed that she won’t get to see her father disciplining John than worried for their safety, but asked. “What about the hunters?”

Her mother almost laughed, and said. “I would be more worried about the other wolves than any human.”

The two of them started howling as the full moon rose over the horizon.

Earlier at the park John met some boys not much older than him.

As he was approaching the group in the park, one said. “John you made it. Good to see that your father’s not treating you like a kid.”

With a few stomps to the dirt, John said. “Yeah, I put him in his place.”

After hearing that his father, Mark, almost laughed, but thought he should make his presents known, and called out. “John, what are you doing here? I understand, you don’t want to run with your sister after what happened,” With an obvious swallow, he continued. “during the last full moon.”

The boys started laughing out loud. With a questionable look on his face, John started saying. “What I didn’t….”

One of the other boys said. “John, I thought you had more control. Chris, man you’re lucky your sister didn’t come with you, tonight.”

Another boys said. “Yeah John, you better control yourself around me. I don’t swing that way, anymore. You’ll get yourself hurt.”

After one of the older boys said that they couldn’t stop laughing. John ran to his father not realizing that he was trying to embarrass him. “I didn’t?”

Mark grabbed his arm and turned him towards the woods. “Oh come on let’s leave these mutts to their laughing.”

John looked to the setting sun, and said. “There’s no time?”

“I know stay close.”

The two of them started running deeper into the woods until they came upon a clearing with groups of people looking to the sky.

John stopped short as his father pulled him to the clearing, and asked. “Who are they?”

Mark let go of his sun, and said. “This is where some of the other wolves go to run, so stay close. I see an old friend.”

Mark greeted his friend, but then heard John yelp as he started to change. Mark’s friend Bill, looked to him, and said. “Your boy needs to learn to control himself more.”

“That’s why….”

Bill was nerves, but said. “Yes, yes, but it’s been years.”

“Yeah for me too. Let’s wait until he’s changed.”

John was still howling after his change was complete, and was looking all around at the others changing, some as violently as he did. Then he saw that his father and his friend hadn’t started their change yet.

They stood together in a pose that John had seen in his father’s memorabilia from school. The two men started a dance of some sorts, but then they started their transformation. It looked as if they were fighting, but they weren’t hurting each other.

The wolves who had changed were not running uncontrollably like they usually do. They were gathering around John to watch Mark and Bill.

The performance ended after the transformation came to a completion, even though it looked as if they were fighting, they looked unharmed. The two of them started a howling the other wolves joined in concert with the same persistence, which was not with anger or sorrow.

The howling lasted for only a few minutes when Mark and Bill started a run with all the wolves from the clearing following. They all ran deeper into the woods to a stream where the pack stopped for a drink. Mark led the pack for a run along the stream that ended by the cliff. There was a waterfall with a shallow pond that the wolves bathed in and were safe for the night.

The next morning John had questions for his father, and he did his best to explain. “When we were in graduate school Bill and I were part of a team who felt that control was more important than strength. We found that with the control our strength was unmatched. The kata we did last night displayed the control that gave us the respect of the pack to be the alphas, if only for the run.”

John looked at his father and without a second thought, he asked again, but more directly. “Why did they respect you?”

Mark was exhausted after last night’s run and wanted to get home for an early shower, but he said. “John think of control and how you haven’t shown it throughout your life, and then you’ll be able to answer your question yourself.”

By J.L. Manning


This story turned out about 100 words too long for the contest at; http://thecultofme.blogspot.co.uk/2014/04/may-short-fiction-contest.html  I don’t expect to win these contests, but they give me new ideas for stories.

June 18th;

I have updated the story and submitted it to Strange Musings Press and was rejected…. I’m not surprised, the story has an uncommon look at Werewolves. I reiceved a rejection from Emby Press http://embypress.com/monster-hunting-quarterly/ the story about Grimms and the blood trait has thinned, but a son of a half Grimm was surprising.

If you know of any press that is looking for 8k words stories, let me know.